The skeleton
- P1 · Set up the contrast. One sentence: "The reading and the lecture address X. The reading argues A; the lecture argues B."
- P2 · First contrast. Reading's first point + lecture's counter to that point.
- P3 · Second contrast. Reading's second point + lecture's counter.
- P4 · Third contrast. Reading's third point + lecture's counter.
Why it works
The TOEFL Integrated Writing rubric explicitly awards points for: (a) accurately presenting the reading, (b) accurately presenting the lecture, (c) showing how they oppose. The skeleton forces all three into every paragraph.
Phrasing that doesn't sound canned
- "The lecturer, however, challenges this by noting that..."
- "In direct contrast, the professor explains that..."
- "The lecture refutes this claim by pointing out..."
Rotate three phrasings — you have three contrast paragraphs. The point isn't to sound elegant; the point is to make the contrast structure visible to the rater within the first 5 seconds of reading.
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